Just thought I would post both of them together to see differences in information, content and flow. Generally an improvement, although feedback was mixed in terms of how professional the overall presentation went and in regards to my leaving strategy.
Lorenzo commented that it was lacking in terms of how a professional would present themselves, something I generally have not improved on in terms of quick turnaround presentations in front of the other course members. I will however, rectify this if the context were one of professional endeavour, despite this comment alone denoting an air of flippancy on my part, which is not the case, just poor time management rearing its ugly head twixt the eyes of foresight.
On a more positive note, my strategy was received well and people were generally interested to see what my ambitions above and beyond the course are. It also allowed me to have more of an insight into people I will be keeping on my contact roll after completing the course, despite the increasing plausibility of not being able to hand in a decent quality/quantity of work.
